I mean it when I say it’s a “raw” version
Some people tell me that I have a lot of typos and misspellings in the public link to GotR. I know that, everything that was a response from the players was taken verbatim from them, I didn’t proofread it. The edited version will have all of those things fixed. Not to say I’m perfect either, I could probably find a dozen mistakes on any given page. I type these updates quickly and there are mistakes every now and then. It’s raw for a reason, so I can say “shut-up.”
While I’m on this note, please ignore the glaring similarities to Bioshock. I never played that game, and I was horrified to find out how similar my names and situations were to Bioshock’s story. “The Rapture” will be changed to “The Reckoning” in the edited version.
Also I find Rosemary’s character to be too similar to MGS2’s Rosemary (again, completely unintentional), so in the edited version her name will be Virginia. I know a lot of you early old-school readers will probably hate that, but I think it’s a fitting name for the character.
